The Rewriting of
Eagle and th' Fiv' Eggs
(Episode 3)
As of today, 21/12/21, the rewriting and editing of this fable Eagle and th' Fiv' Eggs have seemed to come to its ultimatum. Maybe ready to be published. 2 weeks ago I got an invitation to publish with Partridge Publishing House, Singapore. And below is their price to publish this book:
ACT III
i) (III.i.1-2) goofy fashions = foolish manners; fiendish
sickness
= savage disease (pg.66)
ii) (III.i.6) he’s gaudily for my perception = he is
not my
type.
iii) (III.i.15) mould = my distinctive character as taught
and practised (pg.67)
iv) (III.i.92) the cloud = the problem (pg.71)
v) (III.i.95) And full inebriated for on alcohol
influence = totally drunk because of over assumption of alcohol
vi) (III.i.110) Invalidated their professionalism = their
skills that are against the law (pg.72)
vii) (III.i.111) Th’ harsh-entreat’d but beneficial elk’s meat = though it seems
unjust but gives advantage.
viii) (III.i.139&140) to nod = that
is me; effort a mount = to great effort (pg.73)
ix) (III.iia.4) With mainstay = with someone you can rely
on
(pg.75)
x) (III.iia.15) I shall examine my sweat = I shall work in this undertaking. (pg.76)
Furthering the discussion here are the songs and arias in this play. Some
songs can be modern ballads like Honey (Prose), ‘Thy Love’ (Prose), and A
Better Life After Tomorrow(Prose). Others may be accompanied by Strings
Quartet, Quintet, or Orchestra.
Inclusive stupendous effort.”
Sikh Traffic Police: “‘Mong hundred pates,
(I.ii.46-47; pg.23 [also throughout the whole play]) Inclusive stupendous effort. and ‘Mong hundred pates, are combined in one line, though spoken by two characters. This is to means that when the first character finishes his sentence, the second character will continue without hesitation/pause.
Judge: “Ill-natured is legal mere for thyself,
Carry on the lady solicitor.”
Solania: “Thanks Your Honour. I’m seriously intend’d.
(III.iia.16-18; pg.76 [also throughout the whole play]) After the Judge ends his sentence with solicitor, it does not continue with Solania. Thus give to 2 lines. This is to mean a pause in between the speech of the 2 characters. The character Solania in this short pause may give a nod of understanding.
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